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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

雅思考官寫作範文解讀:repeort題型

這是一篇report類的題目,同學們要注意題目中雖然只有兩個問句,但包含了三項應該涉及的內容,即1)人們是如何造成環境污染的;2)對於這些環境污染,政府該如何解決;3)和個人該如何解決。
另外,這類問題的解決方案是根據學生們自己提出的causes,所以解決方案要針對出現問題的原因哦。下面讓我們一起來分析以下範文吧~~

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Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.
第一段改寫了題目要求,簡短地引出了這篇討論的話題和背景。另外,該段又加入了一句總結句,介紹了這篇文章的主要內容和內容佈置。

Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
第二段介紹了造成環境問題的兩大威脅來源:空氣和垃圾污染。在總起句之後,這兩類污染又進行了具體的展開。

Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or water power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.
根據前面的內容,第三段提出了政府可以解決空氣污染的方式,即頒佈相關法律和增加稅收。

Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.
緊接著上一段,此處回答了題目中個人可以如何減少空氣污染和垃圾污染,比如乘坐公共交通和回收利用。

In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.
最後一段就簡短的話就概括了政府和個人在環境保護方面都有自己的責任。當然,如果時間還算充裕的話,還可以簡短的總結下以上的想法~

 

下面附上值得學習的詞彙和片語:

1. environmental 和環境有關的

2. address these problems... 處理這些問題

3. gas emissions from factories 工廠廢氣排放

4. exhaust fumes from vehicles 汽車尾氣排放

5. devastating (a devastating effect) 毀滅性的

6. contaminate (contaminate the earth) 污染

7. renewable energy 可再生資源

8. impose 強加/強行實施

9. reusable 可重複使用的

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